What a chilling and surreal game! I loved a lot of choices you made with this, both how you used Ink and your prose -- like the cycling choice of breathing in/out and how jarring it is to be given the option to braid someone's leg hair. I did notice a number of typos that took me out of the game a bit, in the future I recommend copying and pasting your Ink text into something like Grammarly just to catch as many errors as possible.
This game gave me chills... The music and ambient rain give it such a sad but sinister feeling. The chaos of the dream was so realistic and well written. I simultaneously had no idea what was happening, and knew exactly where I was in the story. It is very well written, and conveys so many confusing emotions. The background being the hazy blue that is described at the beginning is a great touch as well, and really puts the player in the scene.
Really wonderful game with some great writing. I loved the mix of wonderful and absurd things that happened in the dream world. It kept me engaged throughout the experience and curious about what might happen next. The feeling reminded me of some Lewis Carroll stories and I'm interested in checking out the book which inspired this.
The story write really well. I work up at 7 am(I think it is the earlist one), and the story perspective keep change make you feel like you are in a dream. The description and emotional changes make you sooo engage. I really like this game.
The writing is incredibly strong here. The descriptions of dreams fit so well, it really does feel like how dreams are in real life.
Using dreams as a way to explore someone's psyche and lived experience is something I really like here, and I think this concept is done specifically when in this game. I love the way the beginning foreshadows the later revelations.
The story was very well written, feeling like a dream with so many twists and turns. Having the looming mystery of the sister made me so invested. Some of the themes were quite heavy and while I don't mind them, I think a trigger warning would be beneficial, overall amazing game!
this is honestly one of the best recreations of how dreams go I've ever read. I love how the events flow into each other with each segment having a somewhat plot but the next part of the dream being something completely unrelated. This game captures the feeling of flowing through your subconscious with hints of memories and real life thrown in just like in a real dream the experience even captured the part of dreams where hints of other dreams you had that night slip into your current dream though not holding nearly as much significance. this is very well crafted. well done!
The game is very atmospheric, and the descriptions very much lends to the nebulous, dreamy setting. The music choice was well done, feeling calming yet unnerving.
The story is so well written. It was moving and emotional. The bg score fit the game so well that I didnt think anything was missing. I love the writing and how you have adapted such an emotional story to a game. It made me feel things. Excellent job.
The story is so sad and interesting; I think the music really plays a big part, as well as the background; it does give me this suffocating and yet peaceful feeling. It is a really nice game that really explores various concepts.
I really enjoyed this game. The story is well-crafted and thought-provoking, leaving a lasting impression. The narrative explores deeper themes, such as identity, loss, and transformation, which are subtly woven into the gameplay and ending choices.
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What a chilling and surreal game! I loved a lot of choices you made with this, both how you used Ink and your prose -- like the cycling choice of breathing in/out and how jarring it is to be given the option to braid someone's leg hair. I did notice a number of typos that took me out of the game a bit, in the future I recommend copying and pasting your Ink text into something like Grammarly just to catch as many errors as possible.
This game gave me chills... The music and ambient rain give it such a sad but sinister feeling. The chaos of the dream was so realistic and well written. I simultaneously had no idea what was happening, and knew exactly where I was in the story. It is very well written, and conveys so many confusing emotions. The background being the hazy blue that is described at the beginning is a great touch as well, and really puts the player in the scene.
Really wonderful game with some great writing. I loved the mix of wonderful and absurd things that happened in the dream world. It kept me engaged throughout the experience and curious about what might happen next. The feeling reminded me of some Lewis Carroll stories and I'm interested in checking out the book which inspired this.
The story write really well. I work up at 7 am(I think it is the earlist one), and the story perspective keep change make you feel like you are in a dream. The description and emotional changes make you sooo engage. I really like this game.
The writing is incredibly strong here. The descriptions of dreams fit so well, it really does feel like how dreams are in real life.
Using dreams as a way to explore someone's psyche and lived experience is something I really like here, and I think this concept is done specifically when in this game. I love the way the beginning foreshadows the later revelations.
The music and color choice is also very strong.
Fantastic job!
The story was very well written, feeling like a dream with so many twists and turns. Having the looming mystery of the sister made me so invested. Some of the themes were quite heavy and while I don't mind them, I think a trigger warning would be beneficial, overall amazing game!
this is honestly one of the best recreations of how dreams go I've ever read. I love how the events flow into each other with each segment having a somewhat plot but the next part of the dream being something completely unrelated. This game captures the feeling of flowing through your subconscious with hints of memories and real life thrown in just like in a real dream the experience even captured the part of dreams where hints of other dreams you had that night slip into your current dream though not holding nearly as much significance. this is very well crafted. well done!
The game is very atmospheric, and the descriptions very much lends to the nebulous, dreamy setting. The music choice was well done, feeling calming yet unnerving.
The story is so well written. It was moving and emotional. The bg score fit the game so well that I didnt think anything was missing. I love the writing and how you have adapted such an emotional story to a game. It made me feel things. Excellent job.
The story is so sad and interesting; I think the music really plays a big part, as well as the background; it does give me this suffocating and yet peaceful feeling. It is a really nice game that really explores various concepts.
I really enjoyed this game. The story is well-crafted and thought-provoking, leaving a lasting impression. The narrative explores deeper themes, such as identity, loss, and transformation, which are subtly woven into the gameplay and ending choices.